SO MANY EYES WATCH never seeing blurred non person shapes minds never touching too fast spinning world too fast what I am will wither and die you made not need what I am but please take and handle with care this made by God. I don't want to watch never seeing I don't want to pass by in a crowd of non person people holding tight to what little I am To be me I need you minds touching eyes seeing living at peace in a too fast spinning world.
This is excellent, and captures the disorganized and disorienting sensations we often have. Indeed, we are all made by God and should be handled with care.
Thank You Donaya for your positive reply to my contribution to the forum. Kindness is a behaviour I have no defence against.Hopefully it will motivate me to provide further postings.I was equally pleased to to look at your favourite websites.So much so I have book marked same in order that I can visit from time to time,for further inspiration. Best Wishes David.
Hi david tomkinson, I just read your poem, it`s very good. Keep writing.
SheerLin
Hi SheeLin, Once again thank you your comments.I see you live in Canada.Last year I visited Toronto and other parts of Ontario....including Niagra Falls.It was a most enjoyable experience... despite the fact I was rather nervous flying from and to the UK. If I were younger and in better health I wouldn't have thought twice about living there....All of that lovely open space and lots of fresh air. Kindest Regards David
Fellowship
Posted - 09/15/2005 : 07:57:17
writing.
the kindness is done to us for your sharing your poem with us. thanks
